From 2cd58536c5e6a92b79061af37de11db3166a45e6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bukz Date: Tue, 5 Jun 2012 05:49:48 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] grammar nazis ftw git-svn-id: svn://svn.code.sf.net/p/actiongame/code/trunk/ac@6826 e016b1c5-ed68-44aa-a2f7-31cac88cffde --- config/faq.cfg | 4 ++-- config/tutorial.cfg | 11 ++++++----- 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/config/faq.cfg b/config/faq.cfg index 4614a5fd..00420b42 100644 --- a/config/faq.cfg +++ b/config/faq.cfg @@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ faqQuestions = [ "What is the fastest way to get help/support for AssaultCube?" "How do I determine what version of AssaultCube I have installed?" "How do I check for updates for AssaultCube?" - "How to I load my map in coop-edit mode?" - "How to I enter edit mode?" + "How do I load my map in coop-edit mode?" + "How do I enter edit mode?" "How do I switch to a different primary weapon?" "How do I download a custom map and its custom media?" "How do I report an abusive or cheating player?" diff --git a/config/tutorial.cfg b/config/tutorial.cfg index 07064283..432b7ef6 100644 --- a/config/tutorial.cfg +++ b/config/tutorial.cfg @@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ menuitem "" -1 menuitem "For long range engagements, or for better" -1 menuitem "accuracy, use the right mouse button to use" -1 menuitem "the sniper scope. The sniper is the only" -1 -menuitem "weapon that has a scope, andis more accurate" -1 +menuitem "weapon that has a scope, and is more accurate" -1 menuitem "when scoped. However there is no damage bonus." -1 menuitem "" -1 menuitem "Shoot: left mouse" -1 @@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ menuitem " 0Continue - 4/7" "paused 0; tut6" newmenu "AC Tutorial - CTF" menuitem "Capture the Flag, or CTF for short, is one of the" -1 menuitem "most popular gamemodes in AssaultCube. The objective" -1 -menuitem "here is to bring the enemy flag back to your own, All" -1 +menuitem "here is to bring the enemy flag back to your own, all" -1 menuitem "while the opposing team is trying to steal yours! If" -1 menuitem "you are the flag carrier and your own flag is stolen," -1 menuitem "is usually safer to proceed to the safety of your own" -1 @@ -178,10 +178,11 @@ menuitem "straferunning and land on the very edge of a ledge" -1 menuitem "to execute this. Press spacebar again when you are" -1 menuitem "on the edge to jump a bit higher." -1 menuitem "" -menuitem "Rifle sprinting uses the recoil of the Assault Rifle" -1 -menuitem "to propel you across a map." -1 +menuitem "Rifle sprinting uses the recoil of the your gun" -1 +menuitem "to make you move faster than normal. The assault rifle" -1 +menuitem "is the best weapon to rifle sprint with." menuitem "" -1 -menuitem "Rifle jump is similar a rifle sprint, except you use" -1 +menuitem "A rifle jump is similar a rifle sprint, except you use" -1 menuitem "it to jump higher and farther. A grenade jump is a" -1 menuitem "more drastic and violent jump, using the explosion" -1 menuitem "of the grenade to propel yourself." -1